Tuesday, October 25, 2016

My Hieroglyphic Narrative

Hay Read my Hieroglyphic Narrative about my name Its really good!


In a village called Pukaha in Pukaha there was a lovely family called the Broughans. They have a pet Quail chick named basket. He was named basket because he loved sitting and pulling apart baskets. One day the family went out for a walk on a track they like to call Stoney hill because there is lots of stones and hills.

The Broughans. like to keep fit so they go on this walk often. But this time the trees were waving. Tyler the oldest child tried to stop one of the little trees from moving with his arms but they wouldn’t stop. And there was no wind. They kept walking. When they were walking leafs were blowing off the trees and it was winter. One of the leafs blew into Tyler’s mouth.  He took it out.

When they got more closer to the end it got worse.  The stream that they walk by was splashing like rapids there was no big rocks. They carried on and when they got to the track where you can go left to the middle of the track because it is a loop track or go right round again. They went left to the middle. As they got near the middle all around them it got worse. The trees were moving like it was a typhoon.

The stream was running like raging rapids. When they got to the center of the commotion they found it was a lost stone pillar with lots of different carvings all over it. Tyler looked closer. There was a prophecy carved in the rock. He read it to his family. It said in 30 Minutes the whole world will break up and be destroyed. Whoever is reading is, the fate of the world is in your hands! Tyler said we have to destroy the the pillar. “We had better do it now!”  said jackson. “We only have 25minutes.”

We should drop it off the cliff into the lava pit. They quickly ran. Behind them the ground was cracking and the trees were falling the world was being destroyed. They got to the cliff. Tyler through the pillar but the rope tied to his arm was still attached and he fell. He held onto a root. Jackson tried to save Tyler but he fell to and grabbed on to the same root . Tyler said bad luck Jackson. He had an idea. He had a knife in his pocket. Jackson said don’t drop it. jackson said we're going to die. Tyler replied yes we’re going to die. You're going to die. I am going to die but just not today. The knife hit the pillar and broke the rope. The pillar dropped into the lava pit. They lived to tell the tale.


  
                                                 The End